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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 11/01/2014
Engaged To The Devil
Born 1986, F, from CA, United States"Everything was perfect. He was everything I wanted. He told me he'd never hurt me or cheat and that he only had eyes for me. He was more than I could ever hope for. Then he proposed and I felt like I was the luckiest woman in the world," Leah said with tears running down her face as she sat on the floor with her arms wrapped around her, rocking back and forth. "It's okay, everything will be alright. You don't have to continue if you don't want to," Kim responded. Kim was her only true friend. She was always there to make her laugh and to give her advice. Nobody seemed to understand the relationship these two had. They just received weird stares from people. Leah continued, "It's okay, I want to. You've been gone on vacation these past few months and I need to talk to someone. Anyway, so yea, when you left, Alex proposed to me and I was so happy. I said yes and we moved in together. That's when it all started; he became verbally and physically abusive, started lying and cheating... That's when I tried to leave, but he threatened to kill me and hurt my family if I left. I thought he was joking and... And..." Still rocking back and forth her voice got shaky with fear, "I left. I went back home." She began to sob. "That night he broke into my house and murdered my mom... MY MOM!... He shot my parents! They're dead! And my little sister was suffocated. He's crazy. They had to lock him up in a mental hospital." Kim sat there not sure what to do to help her friend. She wasn't sure if she should hug her or just listen.
Minutes before Leah began her story, Alex found himself at an insane asylum. The doctor spoke to him, "It's medication time."
"I want to see her."
"After what happened? Okay but just for a few minutes because she needs to take her medication. Follow me."
As they walked down a long corridor the doctor continued, "You know, it's a shame that someone as young and as beautiful as her would kill her family and suffer from schizophrenia." Alex, looking down as they walked replied, "I still love her and I had no idea she was crazy. Everything seemed fine at first. But I just want to see her one more time before I move on with my life." At the end of the hall the doctor opened a door. Inside was a padded room and Leah sitting on the floor in a straitjacket, rocking back and forth, talking to herself. As Alex stood there looking at her, he realized he had truly been engaged to the devil.
Engaged To The Devil(Monica Hin)
"Everything was perfect. He was everything I wanted. He told me he'd never hurt me or cheat and that he only had eyes for me. He was more than I could ever hope for. Then he proposed and I felt like I was the luckiest woman in the world," Leah said with tears running down her face as she sat on the floor with her arms wrapped around her, rocking back and forth. "It's okay, everything will be alright. You don't have to continue if you don't want to," Kim responded. Kim was her only true friend. She was always there to make her laugh and to give her advice. Nobody seemed to understand the relationship these two had. They just received weird stares from people. Leah continued, "It's okay, I want to. You've been gone on vacation these past few months and I need to talk to someone. Anyway, so yea, when you left, Alex proposed to me and I was so happy. I said yes and we moved in together. That's when it all started; he became verbally and physically abusive, started lying and cheating... That's when I tried to leave, but he threatened to kill me and hurt my family if I left. I thought he was joking and... And..." Still rocking back and forth her voice got shaky with fear, "I left. I went back home." She began to sob. "That night he broke into my house and murdered my mom... MY MOM!... He shot my parents! They're dead! And my little sister was suffocated. He's crazy. They had to lock him up in a mental hospital." Kim sat there not sure what to do to help her friend. She wasn't sure if she should hug her or just listen.
Minutes before Leah began her story, Alex found himself at an insane asylum. The doctor spoke to him, "It's medication time."
"I want to see her."
"After what happened? Okay but just for a few minutes because she needs to take her medication. Follow me."
As they walked down a long corridor the doctor continued, "You know, it's a shame that someone as young and as beautiful as her would kill her family and suffer from schizophrenia." Alex, looking down as they walked replied, "I still love her and I had no idea she was crazy. Everything seemed fine at first. But I just want to see her one more time before I move on with my life." At the end of the hall the doctor opened a door. Inside was a padded room and Leah sitting on the floor in a straitjacket, rocking back and forth, talking to herself. As Alex stood there looking at her, he realized he had truly been engaged to the devil.
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