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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 06/30/2018
SATANIC CURSE chapters 1-3
Born 2001, M, from Mumbai, IndiaCHAPTER ONE
Friday morning I woke up but still I was feeling sleepy but can't sleep anymore because I have to go to school .Momma opened the door before I could and said, well ur up now hurry u don’t have any time to sit idle. I went straight to bathroom picked up my brush putted it in my mouth without toothpaste but remembered yesterdays scene that how teacher shouted on me in front of whole class for having a bad breath while talking .And applied toothpaste so this will not happen again.Took a bath and got dressed up .Mom shouted from downstairs “come down honey breakfast is ready” .she gaved me peanut butter and bread and orange juice .i don’t want to eat peanut butter cause I was eating same breakfast for a week but was happy for orange juice after so many days.I took my cycle from the street and went to chuck’s house .Chuck was already there waiting for me .We started talking about yesterday while riding our cycles, I saw a man , I never saw that man before .I asked chuck about that man he said ‘about whom ur talking about’ ,I think he didn’t saw that man .We reached our school some more buddies joined us near the gate.We went to our classroom and our class teacher Gonzales miss arrived she didn’t liked me from day one so do i.Miss Gonzales is a maths teacher and I was getting it little hard to understand cause this is 10TH grade and this isn’t going to be easy for me .she started teaching about circle. And I was forcefully paying attention to it cause I was feeling damn sleepy.And suddenly I saw myself in a dark place ,sleeping on my desk .Chuck was my best buddy so called up his name’chuck where are you’ miss Gonzales why are all lights are out And now it was a moment where I felt fear running in my whole body .A seven foot tall reddish man with curved horns appeared in front of me wearing a suit like my professer does I asked ‘who are you and what are you doing here and where are my friends and teacher he replied ‘I can understand that you should ask about your friends but why about miss Gonzales u hate her right then why to care about her’ giving a cringy smile .Iam not going to listen what you are saying and want to know who are you .He said ‘first let me answer your first question about why these lights are out ‘umm because they are no tubelights kid and soon lights in your life will be no more and your life will became just like this arena of full of darkness he screamed in a very cruel manner .
CHAPTER 2
And raised his hand to give me a tight slap and I felt it .Again he raised his hand to give me another but I started hearing miss Gonzales voice ‘mister parker! ,mister parker! Get up and someone was moving me , it was chuck ‘get up steve otherwise you will be in great trouble .I woked up and realized its just a dream and smiled in pleasure.
I was smiling because I got relief it was just a dream but miss Gonzales taught something else shouted me to get out .After her lecture in break ,me and chuck sat together taking our meals .Hey steve why your half face is red .i didn’t remembered about the dream and said I was sleeping on that side of face that’s why I think so.Final bell rang all were leaving in groups ,me and chuck took our cycles and while riding a girl joined us and stared driving with us .Chuck was little ackward cause he is not that familiar with girls .I asked her hello iam steve and he is chuck she replied her name is terresa u didn’t notice but yesterday I shifted next to your house so iam your new neighbor .Oh I didn’t know that u shifted next to our house so hello! new neighbor .Now chuck also started talking .This time also I saw a same man on the road that I saw in morning .Terresa asked who is this weird man this time also chuck didn’t saw that man .I saw that same man in the morning also while going on the river proclaimed terresa .I reached home and started watching T.V ,but mom was looking worried and writhing something in home account book ,she was so worried that she didn’t even looked at me .I asked her what happened she replied your dad lost the case and we will not get our company back or our money and dad he will be in jail for one more year.This made me sad and brain my brain wasn’t working what should I do ,I was getting it hard to do my homework ,I was only thinking about dad and what will happen in future.I was scrolling through instagram feed and I saw a post about Satanism I got some interest in it .i checked that account ,but later on I thaught its all bullshit ,but one post seeked my attention it was about popstar Drake ,in that post there was a picture of Drake and below it was written “if you sell ur soul to demon you get more grains” I taught it for a while and this was perfectly matching with my situation .i went to bed but I wasn’t able to sleep that night so peeped out of the window and saw that same weird man in on the other side of the street now I was curious about that man he was talking to somebody in air .Mom came to my room to see that I was asleep or not and I told her about that man ,she said don’t worry about him he must be a psycho or disturbed man and told me to not to think about him and go to sleep.
Next morning I got bad and good news .Good news was my brother was returning from his collage and bad news was very bad,last nigt a robber robbed our house ,he took all money and expensive things .Already we have a poor condition and now this problem and yesterday’s dream clicked in my mind about there will be darkness in your life and this dream is becoming reality.I was going to school by my cycle and terresa joined me ,she took admission in our school I asked her her how can you take admission in one day ,she said ‘my dad can do anything’.chuck joined us ahead .On the way a luis from our class and his gang circled us to show his new cycle .So I taunted him by challenging for race and he accepted .But is was a bad idea ,while racing I got hit by car .Me and my cycle fall 10 feet far and i felt complete unconsious and there was darkness in front of eyes and opened my eyes and saw I was laying on the floor in a black large room same as that dream .I was looking around and somebody murmured . ‘ummm do you want any helpa’ I looked behind and that same demon from dream was looking at me and was on sitting on a chair and there was a empty chair. ‘common son sit on this chair this one is specially for you .I sat on that chair and and said I don’t want any help from you.
Why do I look like a monster. he replied
Yes, I said in fear,
Aahha ! good to see ur not a lyer ,but iam not a monster iam a demon and iam here to help you.
No if you were here to help me u won’t hit me that day.
I slapped you cause you were talking about wrong person miss Gonzales she is bad for you my son.
Thanks but I don’t want any help form you, i rejected his help as he was not fimiliar
Ok my son but from now you will struggle to find me ,but if you want to then go to the curious one he is there for you always and yess you made me little sad by not taking any help from me so here is your punishment
And he disappeared and chair under me disappeared and I was falling down and there was immerse pain through my body and my body was becoming red and black blood was coming out of my mouth,nose and ear and my body tearing up from inside and was feeling very hot from inside like lava is coming out of my body and then I lost consciousness.
CHAPTER THIRD
I woke up around a group of people ,after some time I came to know that i was in city hospital on a stretcher .Docter was talking to mom ,he was surprised there was not a single scratch on my body .But this statement was unbelievable for me cause I felt like I jumped in lava .I called my mom ,she got relief by seeing me back in normal state but was angry because of my behavior .she took me back to home and told me to lay on bed .I missed my school today and asked my mom about Chuck and Terresa she told me that they went to school after some locals helped you .Mom prepared a tomato soup for me I was drinking it and a lady entered in my room with mom she introduced herself as mrs.Carter and she was terresa’s mom .She told me that terresa is her daughter.
Sun started settling down and doorbell ranged ,I went to open the door and saw terresa in front of me but, something else seeked my attention more .The weird man was standing on the other side of the street holding a board, on it, it was written as 'red man told me your in trouble ,I can help you when you need to scramble……..yourself ' .And gave a greedy smile and went somewhere .I welcomed terresa .She was telling me what happened in school today and our examination date is announced .And doorbell ranged again and this time it was my brother jonas ,I was very happy to see him .I introduced him to terresa and he also joined our talk and my evening was going well... .
Full moon was visible in sky and my brother was also with me so i was not frightened about dreams anymore .This night I slept well no dreams, no creepy people .Today jonas was dropping me at school . While walking on the road a boy of jonas’s age was standing in front of us, my brother’s eyes became red in anger after seeing him then a group of boys groped us .They started attacking my brother but my brother was strong enough to fight two-three guys but he can't fight them all alone then they started attacking me also ,I was looking small in front of their physic .Two boys hold my brother’s arm and then a boy sttabed him in stomach and then ran away .I went to nearest house for help fortunately they helped me and then we took jonas to hospital .I called mom ,she arrived very soon and was very worried about him.
In story till now…
Now everything in my was going wrong dad was in jail,brother was in hospital and we spend our remaining money on jonas’s treatment ,now mom had to find the job .My exam are coming near .From now there are disputes between with my teacher and that guy to whom I challenged for a race. And things have changed a lot from many days and yet real problems are not arrived yet.The main story and satan is arrives iam going to make some mistakes and more thrill in my life is coming.
To be continued in chapter 4………… And remember satan is arriving
SATANIC CURSE chapters 1-3(Shreyash dhoke)
CHAPTER ONE
Friday morning I woke up but still I was feeling sleepy but can't sleep anymore because I have to go to school .Momma opened the door before I could and said, well ur up now hurry u don’t have any time to sit idle. I went straight to bathroom picked up my brush putted it in my mouth without toothpaste but remembered yesterdays scene that how teacher shouted on me in front of whole class for having a bad breath while talking .And applied toothpaste so this will not happen again.Took a bath and got dressed up .Mom shouted from downstairs “come down honey breakfast is ready” .she gaved me peanut butter and bread and orange juice .i don’t want to eat peanut butter cause I was eating same breakfast for a week but was happy for orange juice after so many days.I took my cycle from the street and went to chuck’s house .Chuck was already there waiting for me .We started talking about yesterday while riding our cycles, I saw a man , I never saw that man before .I asked chuck about that man he said ‘about whom ur talking about’ ,I think he didn’t saw that man .We reached our school some more buddies joined us near the gate.We went to our classroom and our class teacher Gonzales miss arrived she didn’t liked me from day one so do i.Miss Gonzales is a maths teacher and I was getting it little hard to understand cause this is 10TH grade and this isn’t going to be easy for me .she started teaching about circle. And I was forcefully paying attention to it cause I was feeling damn sleepy.And suddenly I saw myself in a dark place ,sleeping on my desk .Chuck was my best buddy so called up his name’chuck where are you’ miss Gonzales why are all lights are out And now it was a moment where I felt fear running in my whole body .A seven foot tall reddish man with curved horns appeared in front of me wearing a suit like my professer does I asked ‘who are you and what are you doing here and where are my friends and teacher he replied ‘I can understand that you should ask about your friends but why about miss Gonzales u hate her right then why to care about her’ giving a cringy smile .Iam not going to listen what you are saying and want to know who are you .He said ‘first let me answer your first question about why these lights are out ‘umm because they are no tubelights kid and soon lights in your life will be no more and your life will became just like this arena of full of darkness he screamed in a very cruel manner .
CHAPTER 2
And raised his hand to give me a tight slap and I felt it .Again he raised his hand to give me another but I started hearing miss Gonzales voice ‘mister parker! ,mister parker! Get up and someone was moving me , it was chuck ‘get up steve otherwise you will be in great trouble .I woked up and realized its just a dream and smiled in pleasure.
I was smiling because I got relief it was just a dream but miss Gonzales taught something else shouted me to get out .After her lecture in break ,me and chuck sat together taking our meals .Hey steve why your half face is red .i didn’t remembered about the dream and said I was sleeping on that side of face that’s why I think so.Final bell rang all were leaving in groups ,me and chuck took our cycles and while riding a girl joined us and stared driving with us .Chuck was little ackward cause he is not that familiar with girls .I asked her hello iam steve and he is chuck she replied her name is terresa u didn’t notice but yesterday I shifted next to your house so iam your new neighbor .Oh I didn’t know that u shifted next to our house so hello! new neighbor .Now chuck also started talking .This time also I saw a same man on the road that I saw in morning .Terresa asked who is this weird man this time also chuck didn’t saw that man .I saw that same man in the morning also while going on the river proclaimed terresa .I reached home and started watching T.V ,but mom was looking worried and writhing something in home account book ,she was so worried that she didn’t even looked at me .I asked her what happened she replied your dad lost the case and we will not get our company back or our money and dad he will be in jail for one more year.This made me sad and brain my brain wasn’t working what should I do ,I was getting it hard to do my homework ,I was only thinking about dad and what will happen in future.I was scrolling through instagram feed and I saw a post about Satanism I got some interest in it .i checked that account ,but later on I thaught its all bullshit ,but one post seeked my attention it was about popstar Drake ,in that post there was a picture of Drake and below it was written “if you sell ur soul to demon you get more grains” I taught it for a while and this was perfectly matching with my situation .i went to bed but I wasn’t able to sleep that night so peeped out of the window and saw that same weird man in on the other side of the street now I was curious about that man he was talking to somebody in air .Mom came to my room to see that I was asleep or not and I told her about that man ,she said don’t worry about him he must be a psycho or disturbed man and told me to not to think about him and go to sleep.
Next morning I got bad and good news .Good news was my brother was returning from his collage and bad news was very bad,last nigt a robber robbed our house ,he took all money and expensive things .Already we have a poor condition and now this problem and yesterday’s dream clicked in my mind about there will be darkness in your life and this dream is becoming reality.I was going to school by my cycle and terresa joined me ,she took admission in our school I asked her her how can you take admission in one day ,she said ‘my dad can do anything’.chuck joined us ahead .On the way a luis from our class and his gang circled us to show his new cycle .So I taunted him by challenging for race and he accepted .But is was a bad idea ,while racing I got hit by car .Me and my cycle fall 10 feet far and i felt complete unconsious and there was darkness in front of eyes and opened my eyes and saw I was laying on the floor in a black large room same as that dream .I was looking around and somebody murmured . ‘ummm do you want any helpa’ I looked behind and that same demon from dream was looking at me and was on sitting on a chair and there was a empty chair. ‘common son sit on this chair this one is specially for you .I sat on that chair and and said I don’t want any help from you.
Why do I look like a monster. he replied
Yes, I said in fear,
Aahha ! good to see ur not a lyer ,but iam not a monster iam a demon and iam here to help you.
No if you were here to help me u won’t hit me that day.
I slapped you cause you were talking about wrong person miss Gonzales she is bad for you my son.
Thanks but I don’t want any help form you, i rejected his help as he was not fimiliar
Ok my son but from now you will struggle to find me ,but if you want to then go to the curious one he is there for you always and yess you made me little sad by not taking any help from me so here is your punishment
And he disappeared and chair under me disappeared and I was falling down and there was immerse pain through my body and my body was becoming red and black blood was coming out of my mouth,nose and ear and my body tearing up from inside and was feeling very hot from inside like lava is coming out of my body and then I lost consciousness.
CHAPTER THIRD
I woke up around a group of people ,after some time I came to know that i was in city hospital on a stretcher .Docter was talking to mom ,he was surprised there was not a single scratch on my body .But this statement was unbelievable for me cause I felt like I jumped in lava .I called my mom ,she got relief by seeing me back in normal state but was angry because of my behavior .she took me back to home and told me to lay on bed .I missed my school today and asked my mom about Chuck and Terresa she told me that they went to school after some locals helped you .Mom prepared a tomato soup for me I was drinking it and a lady entered in my room with mom she introduced herself as mrs.Carter and she was terresa’s mom .She told me that terresa is her daughter.
Sun started settling down and doorbell ranged ,I went to open the door and saw terresa in front of me but, something else seeked my attention more .The weird man was standing on the other side of the street holding a board, on it, it was written as 'red man told me your in trouble ,I can help you when you need to scramble……..yourself ' .And gave a greedy smile and went somewhere .I welcomed terresa .She was telling me what happened in school today and our examination date is announced .And doorbell ranged again and this time it was my brother jonas ,I was very happy to see him .I introduced him to terresa and he also joined our talk and my evening was going well... .
Full moon was visible in sky and my brother was also with me so i was not frightened about dreams anymore .This night I slept well no dreams, no creepy people .Today jonas was dropping me at school . While walking on the road a boy of jonas’s age was standing in front of us, my brother’s eyes became red in anger after seeing him then a group of boys groped us .They started attacking my brother but my brother was strong enough to fight two-three guys but he can't fight them all alone then they started attacking me also ,I was looking small in front of their physic .Two boys hold my brother’s arm and then a boy sttabed him in stomach and then ran away .I went to nearest house for help fortunately they helped me and then we took jonas to hospital .I called mom ,she arrived very soon and was very worried about him.
In story till now…
Now everything in my was going wrong dad was in jail,brother was in hospital and we spend our remaining money on jonas’s treatment ,now mom had to find the job .My exam are coming near .From now there are disputes between with my teacher and that guy to whom I challenged for a race. And things have changed a lot from many days and yet real problems are not arrived yet.The main story and satan is arrives iam going to make some mistakes and more thrill in my life is coming.
To be continued in chapter 4………… And remember satan is arriving
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JD
06/30/2018Shreyash, there may be others with an interest in this story subject matter who will enjoy reading it, but as someone who only speaks and writes in English, I found too many English writing and punctuation errors in your story in just the first few sentences to want to continue reading. Reading has to be an enjoyable experience for readers, from the beginning, and you have to be able to capture their attention from the start for them to want to continue reading the rest of your story. I think you have more work to do on your English writing skills before are you successfully able to capture the reader's continued interest. At least, this is my own observation and experience. But the more you continue reading and writing, the better you will become at it.
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Shreyash dhoke
07/03/2018thank you for your review glad that you paid attention to my stories and iam a english learner rightnow, i will try to improve my writing and try to express my stories in better manner
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