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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
  • Theme: Mystery stories
  • Subject: Ghost story
  • Published: 08/08/2018

horror girl

By Chloe mount  
Born 2003, F, from Marstion, New Zealand

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The rain pours over a little town of haven. A little girl is getting born. Her father is getting drunk. The mother is slowly dying. Her life is all ready getting messed up. She can't remember these days. She's lucky to live to this day. When shes five she got ran over by a trake. After ten weeks she wakes up.”dad?” she question as she lays in her bed. Her dad was not drunk it was the first time in years. He stand by her bed sleanderset. He was wearing a lot of white. She saw something on his stuff. She started to wonder what was on his stuff. Just then lighting it the ground by the house. She saw it was blood and lots of it. She went to scream but nothing came out. He told her in a deep dark voice”don't worry sweetie i put u back together.” she didn't know what to say to him. She layed frozen in fear. Her once great father looked like a murder. She gone to sit up. She saw her father's tools. She asked scared”what are those dad? Why are they in my room.” she looked around. It didn't look normal. By her bed there where bolts. She gone to grab the hummer. All over her was blood. She screamed”WHAT THE HELL HAPPEN TO ME!!” he grinded. She got cold shivers down her spin. This is not her dad. She didn't know who he is. Her father grabbed her arm.”you won't leave me will you?’ he said deeply. “Not like your mother.” she punched him in the face. His head spayed. She sceramed seeing her dads body on the floor, with no head.”what have i done. Dads dead”

Years went by. The girl was walking to school. Coving her face. Hoping no one will notice who she was. She saw the police. She looked at them. As she turned around more came. She looked at them all. “PLEASE I DON'T WANT TO HURT YOU!!”they laugh. One gone running at her. She lifted her arm up. The ran faster. She punched there chest. It went right through them. She moved her arm splitting them in half.”whos next” as she grinded. They start to shoot. She fell over. Acting dead. The police gone to have a look at her. A blast hit them all. They laid on the ground moving rapidly. She got up started to ran as fast as she could. Bumping into a guy. He sound like he was made out of metal. She thought”was that me” she gets up as she gone to leave he pulled her hoody off her. She gone to punch his
head. But to her suppose it didn't work. Her hand started to hurt. She keeped trying. He started to laugh. He gone to punch her she grabbed his hand. Pulled with all her might. Ripping his arm off. She saw all the wires. “Who or more important what are you?” she asked holding his arm in her hand. “I'm a kid or was a cop killed me.” she explained. She throw his arm to him. She got up. Hearing police she started to ran.”nice to chat but gotta shoot out of here.” she laughed as she rans. She looked beside her to see the guy was running with her. She jumped as high as she could. She landed on a roof. She started to rain roof to roof.

As she laid under a tree. She dozed off. She saw her father and her mother. As she walked to them the cop who killed her and the boy appeared. She gone to attack but she couldn't move. She saw the boy walking over to her. She said weakly”help please.” he grinded. Putting his hand on her shoulder. She heard”cala cala.” it keeps getting loud.”CALA CALA WAKE UP!!” she woke up seeing the guy. He looked panicked. He put her over his shoulder. And started to ran. “Whats going on?” she says confused. He said”it's the rain” she looks at him”im waterproof.” rain hits him. He falls down. “Ow”she says getting up. She looks at him. “Are u ok.” she asked.”I'M MELTING” he laughed. “Ass.” she added. He pulled her down as he gets up. The police surround them. “PUT UR HANDS UP BOTH OF YOUS!!!” they yelled. She puts her hands up. He puts his up. They grin at each other. She saw a lady. She froze up. James looks at her. “Cala CALA!” she tried to get her to snap out of it. The lady walks over. “Cala nice to see u again.” she said showing james her fibbage. “I dont give a hell for that” he said snacky. As the police put handcuffs on cala. “LEAVE HER ALONE!!!” as he punches the fbi lady breaking her nose she falls. He rans to cala. The lady presses a button making james fall on the ground. “JAMES” cala yelled before getting knocked out.

They awake in a dark cold cell. Cala looked around. Trying to find james. “JAMES!!” she yelled trying to find him. “C….cala i…..im here.” she heard his voice. She looked more and more. She saw him. Pulled apart. The door slams shut. She looked behind her. “LET US GO!!” she yelled. As she stands up. “Or what you'll cry to your mummy.” the voice laughed.” oh dude shouldn't of said that now ur dead man.” james said. Cala ran at the guy. Then jumps on him. She bit his neck. Ripping a piece of his neck out. He started to suffer cake on his own blood. Cala got up. Walked to james. She started to put him back together. She started to laugh.”what is it cala.” he asked. As his head is where his head is meant to be.

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Simone Bright

09/23/2018

have fun

have fun

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Simone Bright

09/23/2018

Okay

Okay

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Simone Bright

09/23/2018

You did a good job

You did a good job

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Chloe mount

09/23/2018

i have more to write this is just the start of the story

i have more to write this is just the start of the story

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