STORYSTAR
Logo
  • Home
    • Short Story STARS of the Week
    • Short Story Writer of the Month
    • Read short stories by theme
    • Read short stories by subject
    • Read classic short stories
    • Read Novels
    • Brightest Stars Anthology
    • StoryStar Premium Membership
  • Publish Story
  • Read Stories
    • READ SHORT True Life STORIES
    • READ SHORT Fiction STORIES
    • READ SHORT STORIES FOR Kids
    • READ SHORT STORIES FOR Teens
    • READ SHORT STORIES FOR Adults
    • READ SHORT STORIES FOR All Ages
    • Read short stories by theme
      • Read Short Love stories / Romance Stories
      • Read Short Family & Friends Stories
      • Read Short Survival / Success Stories
      • Read Short Mystery Stories
      • Read Short Inspirational Stories
      • Read Short Drama / Human Interest Stories
      • Read Short Action & Adventure Stories
      • Read Short Science Fiction Stories
      • Read Short Fairy Tales & Fantasy Stories
      • Read Short Story Classics Stories
      • Read Short Horror Stories
    • Read short stories by subject
      • Action
      • Adventure
      • Aging / Maturity
      • Art / Music / Theater / Dance
      • Biography / Autobiography
      • Character Based
      • Childhood / Youth
      • Comedy / Humor
      • Coming of Age / Initiation
      • Community / Home
      • Contests
      • Courage / Heroism
      • Creatures & Monsters
      • Crime
      • Culture / Heritage / Lifestyles
      • Current Events
      • Death / Heartbreak / Loss
      • Drama
      • Education / Instruction
      • Ethics / Morality
      • Fairy Tale / Folk Tale
      • Faith / Hope
      • Family
      • Fantasy / Dreams / Wishes
      • Fate / Luck / Serendipity
      • Flash / Mini / Very Short
      • Friends / Friendship
      • General Interest
      • Ghost Stories / Paranormal
      • History / Historical
      • Horror / Scary
      • Ideas / Discovery / Opinions
      • Inspirational / Uplifting
      • Life Changing Decisions/Events
      • Life Experience
      • Loneliness / Solitude
      • Love / Romance / Dating
      • Memorial / Tribute
      • Memory / Reminiscence
      • Miracles / Wonders
      • Mystery
      • Nature & Wildlife
      • Novels
      • Other / Not Listed
      • Pain / Problems / Adversity
      • Personal Growth / Achievement
      • Pets / Animal Friends
      • Philosophy/Religion/Spirituality
      • Poems & Songs
      • Politics / Power / Abuse of Power
      • Prior Contests
      • Recreation / Sports / Travel
      • Relationships
      • Revenge / Poetic Justice / Karma
      • Science / Science Fiction
      • Seasonal / Holidays
      • Serial / Series
      • Service / Giving Back
      • Survival / Healing / Renewal
      • Time: PAST/Present/FUTURE
      • War & Peace
      • Western / Wild West
  • Contests
  • Blog
  • Comments Feed
  • LOGIN / SIGN UP
  • Facebook
  • Twitter
LOGIN / SIGN UP

Congratulations !


You have been awarded points.
Thank you for !

  • Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
  • Theme: Inspirational
  • Subject: Family
  • Published: 06/30/2010

Brother Gone Astray

By Kristen Higgenbottom Hunt
Born 1981, F, from Memphis, Tennessee, United States
View Author Profile
Read More Stories by This Author
Brother Gone Astray
I always told my annoying little brother to stay close to me whenever we are in public. I never lost him before. On a hot Memphis day in July, our church took a bus full of children to the historic National Civil Rights Museum in Memphis. I was about 11 years old and my brother was five.

I saw this trip as an opportunity to hang out with my friends, not to baby-sit this brat who has magic legs.

"He's your little brother, you're all he has and he looks up to you, my mom said.

"Yeah right," I replied.

As we got to the ticket booth he ran out of line! I managed to run and grab his left hand which appeared to be sticky all of the sudden. I looked a few feet away and there was a candy wrapper with smeared chocolate all over it on the ground. How aggravating! When we got our tickets from the church counselor, I hauled my brother to the bathroom to wash his hands. As we left the bathroom, the counselor wanted to divide the kids by age group during the museum tour.

I sighed and kneeled down to my brother and said, "Please don't get lost and stay with your group, okay?"

He smiles and says "Okay!" He jumped in excitement and went with his age group. I told myself that even if he's out of my protection, I need to try to keep an eye on him.

About an hour later, my age group was looking at the sanitation workers strike display. I looked over and saw the five-to-seven-year-old group at the Lorraine Motel room display in front of us, but I did not see my brother. I felt a rumble at the pit of my stomach and my temperature felt like it went up 10 degrees. I jumped out of line in a panic to find him. I never lost him before. I looked around the entire second floor and he was no where to be found. I took the stairs back down to the first floor and my heart began to beat normally. There he was, sitting in a chair in the gift shop crying. I stared at him for a second, and then walked towards him. When he saw me, he ran to me and hugged me which was something he never did before.

I assured him that everything is going to be fine and he looked up at me and said, "I got lost because you weren't with me."

I stood back and smiled at him. I had no idea how much of an impact I had in his life that hasn't really begun yet at the age of five. He started to wipe his eyes with his sleeve.

I took his tiny hand and said, "Come on, let's go finish the tour."
Please Rate This Story ?
  • Share this story on
  • 10

ADD COMMENT

COMMENTS (0)

Please note the 5,000 character limit for your comment, after which the remaining text will be cut off.

FOLLOW US ON

  • Twitter

LIKE US ON

  • Facebook

STORY CATEGORIES

  • TRUE LIFE FICTION
  • KIDS TEENS ADULTS ALL AGES

  • Member Websites

QUICK LINKS

  • Publish Story
  • Read Stories
  • Contact us
  • About us
  • Privacy Policy

© 2010-2026 STORY STAR. All rights reserved.

Gift Your Points
( available)
Help Us Understand What's Happening