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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Science / Science Fiction
- Published: 06/25/2023
Anissa Andrews
Born 1966, F, from Sarasota/Florida, United States
By Lea Sheryn
Anissa Andrews glanced at her cell phone and then placed it on the picnic table. Clasping her hands, she closed her eyes, and a single tear escaped. I silently sat beside her. My hand stealthily covered hers and I edged closer.
Anissa rarely spoke. I recall the first time I saw her. September, many years ago, when we children began first grade, she appeared at the edge of the schoolyard. The chatter of young voices ceased as we stared in her direction. She differed from the rest of us.
Her store-bought dress just above her knees; black and white saddle shoes covered her feet. She clutched the strap of a patent leather handbag. Anissa did not move, nor did we. A stillness overhung the small group of frightened children.
Finally, I brushed the dust off the backside of my denim overalls and approached the new girl. For a moment, we stood face to face and toe to toe. Her shoes were too white, too clean. My old brogans were brown, and the soles flopped up and down when I walked.
We grew up together. Leaving the little schoolhouse behind, we walked to Edwin Mills to attend high school. Anissa Andrews grew into a tall, slim girl with thick brown hair and a freckled face. As beautiful as she was, she rarely uttered a word. When she did speak, she could say “Hollyn” with a strange foreign lisp and a few other mangled syllables. I understood her perfectly.
I loved Anissa Andrews. Inside my spiral notebook, I wrote her name and enclosed it in a heart. Secretly, in my bedroom, we kissed. Boys meant nothing to me. I wanted Anissa who remained sweet and innocent and virginal. She, on the other hand, returned my favors but without emotion. She was part of my life, but she was never really there—never real.
The text message disturbed her. I tried to comfort her, but she leaped up and ran away. Following close on her heels, I plunged into the underbrush. Gaining speed, she disappeared. I panted behind her. When I reached the clearing, I halted, my eyes bugging in amazement. Anissa stood on the platform of a strange conveyance. For a minute, she was just Anissa—the girl I loved. Then, her eyes rounded and undulated. Her smooth white arms turned a sickish green color. Her beautiful hair vanished, then she disappeared.
The silvery spaceship hovered above the tree line, and, in a flash, evaporated.
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Cheryl Ryan
08/03/2025Nicely written. The story is a touching reflection on love, mystery and the things we may never fully comprehend. The slow buildup from childhood innocence to a surreal and emotional finale where Anisa disappeared was moving. Thank you for sharing!
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BEN BROWN
08/02/2025Amazing! A fascinating story with a great ending. Well done for being todays star.
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Shirley Smothers
08/02/2025Cute story. I did not see the twist ending. Really enjoyed this. Congratulations on Short Story Star of the Day.
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Denise Arnault
08/02/2025That was a fun twist, and just when you had us wondering where this was all going.
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Jessica M.
08/02/2025I started reading this without looking at the image attached so at the end, it was all a surprise to me. I was thinking "why is she running?" "what did that text message say?" Good one, Lea!
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JD
08/01/2025I guess you could rightly call it a "fleeting romance". Short and sweet and gone with the wind.... Happy short story star of the day, Lea.
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Lea Sheryn
08/08/2025Thank you for choosing Anissa Andrews as short story of the day. It's a departure from The American Girl series. Sorry for the late response; it's due to illness.
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