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- Story Listed as: True Life For Adults
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Drama
- Published: 09/10/2023
Seething Soul
Born 1946, M, from PA, United States![Seething Soul](/storage/story/AA22198B-1AC3-E6E8-285C-7E7B9A818D45_1694365884-image(415x263-crop).jpeg)
You think that you are visible? You are not!
You think that others feel you when your hot?
But you're in limbo, where you're not perceived.
And not as popular as you believe.
You think that your expressions are sublime?
Nah! Nah! My friend, you waste your prescious time.
The netherworld is where I keep you locked.
A place where your ambition's will be blocked.
You are delusional! Don''t waste your time
a searching for the phrase you deem sublime.
It is for nought you seek the wayward muse.
No matter how you try-I'll make you lose!
And when you think you've reached your lofty goal.
I'll bury it within my seething soul!
Seething Soul(Radrook)
You think that you are visible? You are not!
You think that others feel you when your hot?
But you're in limbo, where you're not perceived.
And not as popular as you believe.
You think that your expressions are sublime?
Nah! Nah! My friend, you waste your prescious time.
The netherworld is where I keep you locked.
A place where your ambition's will be blocked.
You are delusional! Don''t waste your time
a searching for the phrase you deem sublime.
It is for nought you seek the wayward muse.
No matter how you try-I'll make you lose!
And when you think you've reached your lofty goal.
I'll bury it within my seething soul!
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Radrook
09/14/2023Thanks Clara. Much appreciate your feedback. Sadly there are actually people who do have the attitude described in the poem. I have encountered a few and they always greatly impressed me with their seemingly fanatical dedication to their unjust cause.
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