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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
  • Theme: Mystery
  • Subject: Mystery
  • Published: 10/15/2023

The Cryptic Riddle

By Aleena Nawaz
Adult, F, from Mianwali, Pakistan
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The Cryptic Riddle
The fierce wind made her tremble. To save herself, she tried to find a shelter. She saw a cottage. It exuded an aura of darkness. She mustered up her courage and went inside. Its old walls were adorned with peculiar signs and symbols. Suddenly, she saw a strange riddle written on one of the walls.
It was:
In shadows, I live, yet light I find.
Solve this riddle, or forever be blind.
I visit people at night and vanish with the day.
Who am I? Find me, or forever you will stay.
As she read this riddle, the door and windows of the cottage closed viciously. The only light that illuminated the cottage was the moonlight coming from a small hole in the roof.
Victoria's fear grew. Sweat dripped from her forehead, and her eyes widened. She pondered hard to find the answer but couldn't do so.
Days passed, and with each passing day, the creepiness of the cottage increased. The walls whispered. The shadows danced around her. She was on the verge of losing her sanity when a grey-coloured monstrous hand tried to grab her neck. Suddenly, her trembling lips uttered, "The moon."
As soon as she said this, she heard a loud shriek.
Out of fear, she collapsed. When she woke up, she found herself at her home.
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Dr. Albert Hunter

10/15/2023

The story is so engrossing that I become completely absorbed in the world you have created.

The story is so engrossing that I become completely absorbed in the world you have created.

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Aleena Nawaz

10/15/2023

Many thanks.

Many thanks.

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Soniya sameer

10/15/2023

Aleena, your descriptions are vivid and rich, painting a vibrant picture in readers' mind.

Aleena, your descriptions are vivid and rich, painting a vibrant picture in readers' mind.

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Aleena Nawaz

10/15/2023

Thanks, Soniya.

Thanks, Soniya.

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Charles Walter

10/15/2023

The way you craft words and sentences is truly masterful. Your storytelling is compelling.

The way you craft words and sentences is truly masterful. Your storytelling is compelling.

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Aleena Nawaz

10/15/2023

Thanks a million, Charles.

Thanks a million, Charles.

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Zahid Ahmad

10/15/2023

OMG! It's incredible. I loved it.

OMG! It's incredible. I loved it.

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Aleena Nawaz

10/15/2023

Thank you, Zahid.

Thank you, Zahid.

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Taniya Verma

10/15/2023

What a captivating story! A great read. The story is full of suspense and mystery. The horror ingredient is absolutely amazing.

What a captivating story! A great read. The story is full of suspense and mystery. The horror ingredient is absolutely amazing.

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Aleena Nawaz

10/15/2023

Thanks, Taniya.

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