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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
  • Theme: Science Fiction
  • Subject: Adventure
  • Published: 12/08/2023

The planet of the human eaters

By Saru
Born 1999, U, from Queensland, Australia

After a harrowing journey, Commander Lork took her first footsteps on the unknown planet. What lay before her looked like nothing that she had ever seen on Earth: a landscape of purple mountains, toxic gas that radiated from every surface, and, right under her boots, footprints - large, Of a Three-Toed Creature

After weeks of wondering in the galaxy, she finally kept her first steps on an unknown planet. After a harrowing journey, Commander Lork took her first footsteps on the unknown planet. What lay before her looked like nothing that she had ever seen on Earth: a landscape of purple mountains, toxic gas that radiated from every surface, and, right under her boots, footprints - large, Of a Three Toed Creature. She had chills down her spine and felt dismayed. She took a few back.
“Stop!
She turned back and saw a goliath, blobby, and an extremely creepy creature, it stared at her and hummed,
“Welcome newcomers to plant Koll. We are so happy to see you. Bring your whole family. And don’t forget your little children too”.
Countless creatures started surrounding Lork and she felt this would be her last excursion.

When Mrs. Lork awoke she saw herself in an enormous room with colossal gadgets and amazing technology nobody on Earth ever knew about. Suddenly the creature or you can say the most extraordinary monster started slithering towards her. She was aghast. She started running here and there trying to grab a gadget for defense but they were all protected with a shield Mrs. Lork couldn't open. There was no escape. The monster grinned at her while coming closer. She had no other option and walked towards it. It handcuffed her and took her to another room. It started talking with its friend whom they met while going. Mrs. Lork had a language translator handy and she quickly wore it. " I found this human while I was having a walk in the Conceal (A town) when I saw it. Now that the solar eclipse is coming close. We can finally have the humans." Lork was shocked. They were going to eat her, and who was this other human who they had caught?
Finally, they reached the room, it pushed Lork inside the room and locked it from the outside. She got up and started exploring. And to her delight, she found her husband! He had gone on an excursion a few weeks ago and didn't come back so Lork had come to find him. Daniel(Her husband) told her that he had heard the creatures as well and estimated the solar eclipse was just 5 days away!
Now the only problem was how to escape!

The more she was overjoyed to meet her husband, the more fear went down her spine.
Her husband was resting and she was trying to figure out a way to get out when suddenly the cage’s door opened and the couple ran outside. As their luck would say there were no guards outside and they ran until they reached a dead end.
Suddenly, they heard the sound of laughter. It was the aliens!
“ We knew you would try to escape but you should know that all the other doors are tightly shut.” said the aliens while budging the humans back in their cage.
Now only luck could save them.
It was the day, of the solar eclipse. I saw a cage on top of an enormous fire. Knowing it would be the end of us I hugged my husband for the last time before entering the cage. As the rituals were going on I could feel the hungry eyes of the creatures.
Suddenly out of nowhere my husband(Daniel) turned into an enormous creature way larger than the other aliens and killed all the aliens while taking me out of the cage. Well, we were safe at last but what about my husband?

The planet of the human eaters(Saru) After a harrowing journey, Commander Lork took her first footsteps on the unknown planet. What lay before her looked like nothing that she had ever seen on Earth: a landscape of purple mountains, toxic gas that radiated from every surface, and, right under her boots, footprints - large, Of a Three-Toed Creature

After weeks of wondering in the galaxy, she finally kept her first steps on an unknown planet. After a harrowing journey, Commander Lork took her first footsteps on the unknown planet. What lay before her looked like nothing that she had ever seen on Earth: a landscape of purple mountains, toxic gas that radiated from every surface, and, right under her boots, footprints - large, Of a Three Toed Creature. She had chills down her spine and felt dismayed. She took a few back.
“Stop!
She turned back and saw a goliath, blobby, and an extremely creepy creature, it stared at her and hummed,
“Welcome newcomers to plant Koll. We are so happy to see you. Bring your whole family. And don’t forget your little children too”.
Countless creatures started surrounding Lork and she felt this would be her last excursion.

When Mrs. Lork awoke she saw herself in an enormous room with colossal gadgets and amazing technology nobody on Earth ever knew about. Suddenly the creature or you can say the most extraordinary monster started slithering towards her. She was aghast. She started running here and there trying to grab a gadget for defense but they were all protected with a shield Mrs. Lork couldn't open. There was no escape. The monster grinned at her while coming closer. She had no other option and walked towards it. It handcuffed her and took her to another room. It started talking with its friend whom they met while going. Mrs. Lork had a language translator handy and she quickly wore it. " I found this human while I was having a walk in the Conceal (A town) when I saw it. Now that the solar eclipse is coming close. We can finally have the humans." Lork was shocked. They were going to eat her, and who was this other human who they had caught?
Finally, they reached the room, it pushed Lork inside the room and locked it from the outside. She got up and started exploring. And to her delight, she found her husband! He had gone on an excursion a few weeks ago and didn't come back so Lork had come to find him. Daniel(Her husband) told her that he had heard the creatures as well and estimated the solar eclipse was just 5 days away!
Now the only problem was how to escape!

The more she was overjoyed to meet her husband, the more fear went down her spine.
Her husband was resting and she was trying to figure out a way to get out when suddenly the cage’s door opened and the couple ran outside. As their luck would say there were no guards outside and they ran until they reached a dead end.
Suddenly, they heard the sound of laughter. It was the aliens!
“ We knew you would try to escape but you should know that all the other doors are tightly shut.” said the aliens while budging the humans back in their cage.
Now only luck could save them.
It was the day, of the solar eclipse. I saw a cage on top of an enormous fire. Knowing it would be the end of us I hugged my husband for the last time before entering the cage. As the rituals were going on I could feel the hungry eyes of the creatures.
Suddenly out of nowhere my husband(Daniel) turned into an enormous creature way larger than the other aliens and killed all the aliens while taking me out of the cage. Well, we were safe at last but what about my husband?

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