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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Relationships
- Published: 03/08/2024
Knocking Her Door
Born 2007, M, from Salinas, United States.png)
A young skinny handsome man plans to go to his girlfriends house to watch a new movie with her. But he's got another idea, he wants to do something different than usual, he drives to a nearby flower market and grabs one of the outstanding flowers. He then hops into his old decade car and drives off where he knocks on his girlfriend's door and drops the flowers on the floor. Suddenly he runs off into his car and he seems to be scared to interact with his girlfriend.
He and his girlfriend have been together for five years now but he's still shy till this day. As James is sitting in his car, he sees his girlfriend coming out of her house. She sees James in his car a few feet away from her.
"James, not again, we've been together for years now and you still run off." She said
James comes out of his car with both of his hands in his pockets. His girlfriend looks happy that he made it because James sometimes is bad at taking directions. Even if it's regular directions, James has a bad memory. His girlfriend comes to him and tells him to hold her hand. They hold hands and go into the mist. The beautiful flowers were then left there sitting on the door step.
"I got you red flowers Maya" James said in his head.
Knocking Her Door(Leonardo Lezama)
A young skinny handsome man plans to go to his girlfriends house to watch a new movie with her. But he's got another idea, he wants to do something different than usual, he drives to a nearby flower market and grabs one of the outstanding flowers. He then hops into his old decade car and drives off where he knocks on his girlfriend's door and drops the flowers on the floor. Suddenly he runs off into his car and he seems to be scared to interact with his girlfriend.
He and his girlfriend have been together for five years now but he's still shy till this day. As James is sitting in his car, he sees his girlfriend coming out of her house. She sees James in his car a few feet away from her.
"James, not again, we've been together for years now and you still run off." She said
James comes out of his car with both of his hands in his pockets. His girlfriend looks happy that he made it because James sometimes is bad at taking directions. Even if it's regular directions, James has a bad memory. His girlfriend comes to him and tells him to hold her hand. They hold hands and go into the mist. The beautiful flowers were then left there sitting on the door step.
"I got you red flowers Maya" James said in his head.
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