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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 03/16/2011
After Life
Born 1990, M, from Boston, Massachusetts, United StatesAfter Life
Hector Santana
Date: June 21, 2010
Chapter one: Lord Hector and History
There is a crime in the city of Jamaica Plain. No one knows who did it, there wasn't a clue or anything, just a bite on the neck of the victim. The victim's name was Ramon, he was a worker from Tyx, the most famous liquor store in Jamaica Plain. They wanted his blood because they thought he got a key that vampires needed to be immortal and unstoppable, but they made a mistake, he wasn't the guy.
There was a guy, half man half wolf, trying to stop this and have revenge on those who transformed him into a wolf. This war had been going on since years ago. He was one of the most dangerous guys in the whole world, known as Lord Hector. He was vicious and didn't care about nobody. He was feared everywhere his name was mentioned. He was born the same time Dracula was born. They thought he was a myth, that he was hiding everywhere. He had a human slave to do his dirty work and their reward was immortality, once they had reached the age of sixty. If they behaved and did every command he asked, many people had that chance to survive, others didn't.
Legend says Lord Hector was created after a massacre war in his town when the Japanese attacked. They were poor and they didn't have weapons to defend themselves. Lord Hector was laying down on the floor bleeding to death, when he was found by a vampire, one of Dracula's servants. He said he needed more people to be with him at night, and promised him protection so that nobody could hurt him. So he let the guy transform him into one of them, and he was a sidekick for thousands of years. He learned everything there was to learn, then got away and started making his own kingdom. He called it South Side Lions. They were the biggest tribe in the whole wide world, enemies of many packs of wolves in the United States, but nobody could stop them. Humans somehow let the war between creatures happen and destroy their city.
Lord Hector was a dictator of the night. The police let him keep the baddest gangsters in the whole of Boston and he was trying to get the whole Bronx too. He was on the top of the list but New York was taken and so was the state of Texas. He was angry because he couldn't get those states, the largest ones, like Miami. Lord Hector went to the state of New York to talk to the chief to see what they can do about so they don't have to go to war and kill all their vampire but what they didn't know their had other enemies to worry about, the first pack of wolves they found went they first arrived to the United States when there were just ten of them. They crossed a line they should never have crossed - the line of the wolf. The wolves are peaceful people, they're always smiling and never mad. But when you cross their line it is a terrible thing to do. The dark force jumped one of them and sent it back to his pack telling them that they were here and there wasn't nothing they could do about it. Then the wolves wanted revenge, because of them attacking their friend. The wolves are sensitive animals that don't like fighting, unless you cost them trouble. Then they will fight at any cost, until all the vampires die.
Chapter two: Animals War
They were waiting on a guy name Sacamoto. He was a big and tall white guy who worked at a clinic, they wanted his blood because they were still looking for the key, and he was on the list. The vampire team waited at the hotel for half an hour. When he arrived they all stood up and started shooting at him. He was trying to run but their wasn't a place to hide. When the wolves arrived they got in front of him, waiting for the vampires. When the vampires arrived Sacamoto ran as fast as he could, because he was scared of being involve in the fight between all of them. The fight was so loud you could even hear it a block away. The hotel was on fire. Sacamoto was on another building hiding, but it didn't work. A wolf was following his scent. He told the wolf to kill him, that he was prepared to die before being followed by monsters. The wolf said no, because their was only one guy for both tribes that could decide who could kill him or not. He also said that he was his protector, his saver, and no one was allowed to be around him, because they could be a vampire. The man was peeing in his pants and the wolf smelled the pee and laughed in his face. Then a vampire heard the wolf laugh and found him and started fighting, they were throwing things at each other. The vampires were going to bite Sacamoto, but Charlie, the wolf, got in front of him and got bit by all of them.
Sacamoto ran and left him behind, but they were not worried about Sacamoto, they were too happy taking Charlie's blood, because it gave them more strength. They were feeling younger than ever so they took him by part's. They took everything and split him in two. After they finished they were laughing and cleaning up when Macala came in, one of the stronger wolves in the pack, and a third of the others. He got furious when he saw Charlie on the floor with all his parts taken off, so he attacked Mike, the one closet to him in the group. They throw rocks at each other like they away do, and the others stayed there and watched the whole thing, nothing to do. Mike was feeling tired and he tagged Joshua to fight Macala, but Macala didn't have no strength at all so he was easy to take out for Joshua. While Joshua was getting ready, Macala did the smart thing and transformed into an animal so he could communicate with the others when they came, in less them an hour, and the three vampires ran.
Chapter three: Trigger
After the vampire from Lord Hector retreated, Sacamoto came back and didn't saw nobody so he went back to the hotel and everything was burned. He started crying like a baby. A woman came in and asked him if he needed help. He said he needed a place to live and redo his life over, but he knew they were coming back so he asked for new clothes so the vampires wouldn't follow him. But what he didn't know was that the girl was a vampire. Her mission was to gave him a day to refresh and get back on business so they could take his blood. The girl took him to the bathroom of her house. He went to the sink so he could refresh himself and then wanted to take a shower. He took a long time for that and when he got out he found a man checking his bag. He screamed at him but the man didn't listen, then the man screamed like a vampire and the girl came and calmed everything down. Her power was to calm people down when she looked at them in the eyes. He asked her what was going on and she lied to him saying that it was her brother that came out of jail. But it was really her boss. Then Sacamoto saw a chair with bells around it and with a needle like doctors use when they take out your blood, and he got paranoid and went outside to get some fresh air. When he got out a man stopped walking and stayed there for a while looking at him like he knew him. So he stood up and went back inside and when he did he saw the girl and the man in blood, so he ran out the house, and that's how the other man captured him and took him to a car and wouldn't let him go for any reason. They beat him up, making him bleed, and took him to their hide out.
When Lord Hector found out that he esscaped from the woman he got so angry that he sent someone to blow her up in the morning, and the man. He sent one of his greater soldiers, his right hand since the beginning, his name was Timothy.
To be continued...
After Life(Hector Santana)
After Life
Hector Santana
Date: June 21, 2010
Chapter one: Lord Hector and History
There is a crime in the city of Jamaica Plain. No one knows who did it, there wasn't a clue or anything, just a bite on the neck of the victim. The victim's name was Ramon, he was a worker from Tyx, the most famous liquor store in Jamaica Plain. They wanted his blood because they thought he got a key that vampires needed to be immortal and unstoppable, but they made a mistake, he wasn't the guy.
There was a guy, half man half wolf, trying to stop this and have revenge on those who transformed him into a wolf. This war had been going on since years ago. He was one of the most dangerous guys in the whole world, known as Lord Hector. He was vicious and didn't care about nobody. He was feared everywhere his name was mentioned. He was born the same time Dracula was born. They thought he was a myth, that he was hiding everywhere. He had a human slave to do his dirty work and their reward was immortality, once they had reached the age of sixty. If they behaved and did every command he asked, many people had that chance to survive, others didn't.
Legend says Lord Hector was created after a massacre war in his town when the Japanese attacked. They were poor and they didn't have weapons to defend themselves. Lord Hector was laying down on the floor bleeding to death, when he was found by a vampire, one of Dracula's servants. He said he needed more people to be with him at night, and promised him protection so that nobody could hurt him. So he let the guy transform him into one of them, and he was a sidekick for thousands of years. He learned everything there was to learn, then got away and started making his own kingdom. He called it South Side Lions. They were the biggest tribe in the whole wide world, enemies of many packs of wolves in the United States, but nobody could stop them. Humans somehow let the war between creatures happen and destroy their city.
Lord Hector was a dictator of the night. The police let him keep the baddest gangsters in the whole of Boston and he was trying to get the whole Bronx too. He was on the top of the list but New York was taken and so was the state of Texas. He was angry because he couldn't get those states, the largest ones, like Miami. Lord Hector went to the state of New York to talk to the chief to see what they can do about so they don't have to go to war and kill all their vampire but what they didn't know their had other enemies to worry about, the first pack of wolves they found went they first arrived to the United States when there were just ten of them. They crossed a line they should never have crossed - the line of the wolf. The wolves are peaceful people, they're always smiling and never mad. But when you cross their line it is a terrible thing to do. The dark force jumped one of them and sent it back to his pack telling them that they were here and there wasn't nothing they could do about it. Then the wolves wanted revenge, because of them attacking their friend. The wolves are sensitive animals that don't like fighting, unless you cost them trouble. Then they will fight at any cost, until all the vampires die.
Chapter two: Animals War
They were waiting on a guy name Sacamoto. He was a big and tall white guy who worked at a clinic, they wanted his blood because they were still looking for the key, and he was on the list. The vampire team waited at the hotel for half an hour. When he arrived they all stood up and started shooting at him. He was trying to run but their wasn't a place to hide. When the wolves arrived they got in front of him, waiting for the vampires. When the vampires arrived Sacamoto ran as fast as he could, because he was scared of being involve in the fight between all of them. The fight was so loud you could even hear it a block away. The hotel was on fire. Sacamoto was on another building hiding, but it didn't work. A wolf was following his scent. He told the wolf to kill him, that he was prepared to die before being followed by monsters. The wolf said no, because their was only one guy for both tribes that could decide who could kill him or not. He also said that he was his protector, his saver, and no one was allowed to be around him, because they could be a vampire. The man was peeing in his pants and the wolf smelled the pee and laughed in his face. Then a vampire heard the wolf laugh and found him and started fighting, they were throwing things at each other. The vampires were going to bite Sacamoto, but Charlie, the wolf, got in front of him and got bit by all of them.
Sacamoto ran and left him behind, but they were not worried about Sacamoto, they were too happy taking Charlie's blood, because it gave them more strength. They were feeling younger than ever so they took him by part's. They took everything and split him in two. After they finished they were laughing and cleaning up when Macala came in, one of the stronger wolves in the pack, and a third of the others. He got furious when he saw Charlie on the floor with all his parts taken off, so he attacked Mike, the one closet to him in the group. They throw rocks at each other like they away do, and the others stayed there and watched the whole thing, nothing to do. Mike was feeling tired and he tagged Joshua to fight Macala, but Macala didn't have no strength at all so he was easy to take out for Joshua. While Joshua was getting ready, Macala did the smart thing and transformed into an animal so he could communicate with the others when they came, in less them an hour, and the three vampires ran.
Chapter three: Trigger
After the vampire from Lord Hector retreated, Sacamoto came back and didn't saw nobody so he went back to the hotel and everything was burned. He started crying like a baby. A woman came in and asked him if he needed help. He said he needed a place to live and redo his life over, but he knew they were coming back so he asked for new clothes so the vampires wouldn't follow him. But what he didn't know was that the girl was a vampire. Her mission was to gave him a day to refresh and get back on business so they could take his blood. The girl took him to the bathroom of her house. He went to the sink so he could refresh himself and then wanted to take a shower. He took a long time for that and when he got out he found a man checking his bag. He screamed at him but the man didn't listen, then the man screamed like a vampire and the girl came and calmed everything down. Her power was to calm people down when she looked at them in the eyes. He asked her what was going on and she lied to him saying that it was her brother that came out of jail. But it was really her boss. Then Sacamoto saw a chair with bells around it and with a needle like doctors use when they take out your blood, and he got paranoid and went outside to get some fresh air. When he got out a man stopped walking and stayed there for a while looking at him like he knew him. So he stood up and went back inside and when he did he saw the girl and the man in blood, so he ran out the house, and that's how the other man captured him and took him to a car and wouldn't let him go for any reason. They beat him up, making him bleed, and took him to their hide out.
When Lord Hector found out that he esscaped from the woman he got so angry that he sent someone to blow her up in the morning, and the man. He sent one of his greater soldiers, his right hand since the beginning, his name was Timothy.
To be continued...
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