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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 11/10/2011
Just A River of Dark Intent
Born 1949, M, from NLR /Arkansas, United StatesJoey is standing on the bridge looking down into the dark massive moving waters of the river below.
He contemplates jumping in! He sees this as the only solution to his problems.
He is looking down and the dark massive moving waters seems to beacon him.
"Join us! Join us!" the dark massive moving waters of the river seem to be saying.
Joey is becoming intoxicated by these dark massive moving waters of the river and the words that they are speaking to him. He hears them say "Come on in! Come on in! We're down here waiting on you, please don't make us wait long!" Still Joey is holding back! He seems to have some sense of sanity left!
It suddenly flashes into Joeys' mind that the river is always a dangerous dark massive moving place! Just like a python with its huge mouth ready and willing to attack and swallow anything, any size, just to satisfy its greedy appetite! He begins to realize that he would just be another one of its victims!
So he decides not to satisfy its greedy appetite, he decides not to become just another victim like all its other victims. He would not become just another victim of that dark massive moving river!
Just A River of Dark Intent(Dorsey Baker)
Joey is standing on the bridge looking down into the dark massive moving waters of the river below.
He contemplates jumping in! He sees this as the only solution to his problems.
He is looking down and the dark massive moving waters seems to beacon him.
"Join us! Join us!" the dark massive moving waters of the river seem to be saying.
Joey is becoming intoxicated by these dark massive moving waters of the river and the words that they are speaking to him. He hears them say "Come on in! Come on in! We're down here waiting on you, please don't make us wait long!" Still Joey is holding back! He seems to have some sense of sanity left!
It suddenly flashes into Joeys' mind that the river is always a dangerous dark massive moving place! Just like a python with its huge mouth ready and willing to attack and swallow anything, any size, just to satisfy its greedy appetite! He begins to realize that he would just be another one of its victims!
So he decides not to satisfy its greedy appetite, he decides not to become just another victim like all its other victims. He would not become just another victim of that dark massive moving river!
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