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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
  • Theme: Love stories / Romance
  • Subject: Love / Romance / Dating
  • Published: 11/28/2011

Wonderful Love

By Sachitra chitra
Born 1985, F, from Cheras, Malaysia
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There is a girl who lives a simple life. She does not like to be fashionable or wear make up. She's almost a homely girl. She is eswarie, a teenager, living in a world without fun, but she likes to pray a lot. Eswarie believes prayers bring joy in her life, but nothing comes from any other things. it makes eswarie's mom worried. she is afraid her daughter won't be married in life.

Eswarie's mom looks out for a groom for her. then after a long time, eswarie's mother found a groom when she visited with her family in a temple nearby. eswarie just agreed and did not refuse her mother's word. she just prepared and then she met the groom. He was a pleasant looking guy, simple and spiritual, just like eswarie. eswarie's mother felt that this guy is right for eswarie.

Since the guy did not give a quick answer, eswarie's mom waited until noon, when the guy said he is attracted to eswarie but needs communications with her by phone as well.

So the love story started. where on saturday the guy sends god picture wallpaper. eswarie replies to him asking who is this. he answer with his name. then seem is in ayappan malai. eswarie does not talk more than spiritual, like giving mantra as day begins. on monday this guy calls her and talks as normal, where eswarie realises this guy has not told his family about eswarie, only his uncle knows. it makes eswarie worried what will happen in the future.

When eswarie is back home she lets her mother know about it, and her mother worries whether to let the guys uncle to know about it. They decide it is better to not continue until he perform all his prayers for ayyapan. ayapan swami is someone that would not marry and satisfied his life.

So thus came some critical hurting in eswarie. she scolded her mother to take all quick decisions. they plan to sleep but her mom asks to pray. she does so it makes relaxed her mind. when eswarie thinks all is good for her, there comes a call from vel's mother to give shock to eswarie. When she assumes all is going fine, there comes in phone the message, " eswarie don't ever sms or call me any more."

It gave shock to eswarie, but she managed to relax her mind and put her feet toward god. she begins the day as usual, just sms the guy to say thanks and take care in return. when eswarie was in work she received a call from vel, another big shock for eswarie. the guy asks why no sms? where is answer for my sms? eswarie replies, i have answered it, thanks, didn't you get it? the guy says, why didn't u ask me a question about my decision? eswarie said, it is ok now. you explained it to me now. the guy says, i will call you back, and put the phone off.

eswarie was being confused about what is going on in her life. later the guy calls again and talks pleasantly, like nothing was wrong. then eswarie asked, what did you decide? what did your mom say? the guy says, my mom likes you, but i decided to make our relationship silent until vel finished his ayappan pooja.

eswarie asks, so what did you decide? he says, we can sms as usual, because you seem to be helping me lot in control of my mind by giving manra to get into prayers. It seems you are not like other girls that disturb me and my mind. you are so understanding. that is why you impress me.

Wonderful Love(sachitra chitra) There is a girl who lives a simple life. She does not like to be fashionable or wear make up. She's almost a homely girl. She is eswarie, a teenager, living in a world without fun, but she likes to pray a lot. Eswarie believes prayers bring joy in her life, but nothing comes from any other things. it makes eswarie's mom worried. she is afraid her daughter won't be married in life.

Eswarie's mom looks out for a groom for her. then after a long time, eswarie's mother found a groom when she visited with her family in a temple nearby. eswarie just agreed and did not refuse her mother's word. she just prepared and then she met the groom. He was a pleasant looking guy, simple and spiritual, just like eswarie. eswarie's mother felt that this guy is right for eswarie.

Since the guy did not give a quick answer, eswarie's mom waited until noon, when the guy said he is attracted to eswarie but needs communications with her by phone as well.

So the love story started. where on saturday the guy sends god picture wallpaper. eswarie replies to him asking who is this. he answer with his name. then seem is in ayappan malai. eswarie does not talk more than spiritual, like giving mantra as day begins. on monday this guy calls her and talks as normal, where eswarie realises this guy has not told his family about eswarie, only his uncle knows. it makes eswarie worried what will happen in the future.

When eswarie is back home she lets her mother know about it, and her mother worries whether to let the guys uncle to know about it. They decide it is better to not continue until he perform all his prayers for ayyapan. ayapan swami is someone that would not marry and satisfied his life.

So thus came some critical hurting in eswarie. she scolded her mother to take all quick decisions. they plan to sleep but her mom asks to pray. she does so it makes relaxed her mind. when eswarie thinks all is good for her, there comes a call from vel's mother to give shock to eswarie. When she assumes all is going fine, there comes in phone the message, " eswarie don't ever sms or call me any more."

It gave shock to eswarie, but she managed to relax her mind and put her feet toward god. she begins the day as usual, just sms the guy to say thanks and take care in return. when eswarie was in work she received a call from vel, another big shock for eswarie. the guy asks why no sms? where is answer for my sms? eswarie replies, i have answered it, thanks, didn't you get it? the guy says, why didn't u ask me a question about my decision? eswarie said, it is ok now. you explained it to me now. the guy says, i will call you back, and put the phone off.

eswarie was being confused about what is going on in her life. later the guy calls again and talks pleasantly, like nothing was wrong. then eswarie asked, what did you decide? what did your mom say? the guy says, my mom likes you, but i decided to make our relationship silent until vel finished his ayappan pooja.

eswarie asks, so what did you decide? he says, we can sms as usual, because you seem to be helping me lot in control of my mind by giving manra to get into prayers. It seems you are not like other girls that disturb me and my mind. you are so understanding. that is why you impress me.

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