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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Drama / Human Interest
- Subject: Courage / Heroism
- Published: 05/01/2012
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Born 1999, F, from England, United KingdomI finally find myself, as my eyes pull open I see the dust particles slowly flutter around me. Where am I? I slowly pick myself up off the cold, wooden floor to inspect my surroundings. Everything aches; my arms, legs, head. Is anyone here? Cautiously, I attempt to walk, the dusty floor creaks. I freeze; too scared to move. The tightness of the room, starts to make me feel nauseous. I crane my neck, desperate to hear something, anything. Silence. I attempt to move again; my weak legs quiver beneath me and give way. The loud thud makes my head groan. If anyone is here, they have heard me now.
Not finished yet!(Natalie R-Smith) I finally find myself, as my eyes pull open I see the dust particles slowly flutter around me. Where am I? I slowly pick myself up off the cold, wooden floor to inspect my surroundings. Everything aches; my arms, legs, head. Is anyone here? Cautiously, I attempt to walk, the dusty floor creaks. I freeze; too scared to move. The tightness of the room, starts to make me feel nauseous. I crane my neck, desperate to hear something, anything. Silence. I attempt to move again; my weak legs quiver beneath me and give way. The loud thud makes my head groan. If anyone is here, they have heard me now.
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