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  • Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
  • Theme: Inspirational
  • Subject: Crime
  • Published: 06/03/2012

The House

By Kirsty entwistle
Born 2000, F, from Crewe, United States
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The House

One blustering night on top of the steep hill, lived a busy family. Danica(mum) Derik (dad) and their little daughter Summer. It was morning in the new creepy house.

I was waking from my junior bed. I rubbed my sobbing eyes, as i got dressed into my jogging suit then i ran down the stairs to hear my father talking on the phone, penciling it in his book.

As day became night my mum had to leave for dancing lessons, but they never work, she has got two left feet. My father had to leave for a meeting, as he owns his own business, but it is still strange, as he had to leave for it at eight o clock. So they both gave my a kiss on the forehead and told me they loved me and set to where they were going.

I said "bye mum and dad." then i closed the door.

It was my first time alone in the scary place. i slowly looked around and took a deep breath and walked in the living room and turned on the t.v. All of a sudden the phone rang, ring ring. I stared at it then i walked over to the phone and picked it up. all i could hear was this strange breathing so i took it from my ear and frowned at the phone, then slammed it down. "creeps" i said then i turned around. ring ring went the phone. suddenly i dashed into the living room and jumped behind the sofa. don't be a fool, i thought. Soon after the light started to flicker. Oh No, mum's gonna kill me. i spilt my drink on the sofa. I think i should go to bed before i do any more damage and also it was ten o clock.

So i dashed up the stairs quick as lightning and thought i better call my mum to see when she is coming home, so i went to the phone in my bedroom only to realise it had been cut. "strange" i said as i grabbed my pjs and went into the bathroom to get changed and brush my teeth. then i turned on the tap and washed my face.

Then i walked into the bedroom and locked the door behind me just in case of the monsters. so i checked in the wardrobe and under the bed then i turned out the light and climbed into the bed. "OH i'm so glad we are safely locked in here together" shouted a strange voice. "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW" went Summer.

The next morning the parents arrived to find their daughter there in pieces. Soon later the police arraived to examine the body but there was no evidence to what happened.

The House(kirsty entwistle) One blustering night on top of the steep hill, lived a busy family. Danica(mum) Derik (dad) and their little daughter Summer. It was morning in the new creepy house.

I was waking from my junior bed. I rubbed my sobbing eyes, as i got dressed into my jogging suit then i ran down the stairs to hear my father talking on the phone, penciling it in his book.

As day became night my mum had to leave for dancing lessons, but they never work, she has got two left feet. My father had to leave for a meeting, as he owns his own business, but it is still strange, as he had to leave for it at eight o clock. So they both gave my a kiss on the forehead and told me they loved me and set to where they were going.

I said "bye mum and dad." then i closed the door.

It was my first time alone in the scary place. i slowly looked around and took a deep breath and walked in the living room and turned on the t.v. All of a sudden the phone rang, ring ring. I stared at it then i walked over to the phone and picked it up. all i could hear was this strange breathing so i took it from my ear and frowned at the phone, then slammed it down. "creeps" i said then i turned around. ring ring went the phone. suddenly i dashed into the living room and jumped behind the sofa. don't be a fool, i thought. Soon after the light started to flicker. Oh No, mum's gonna kill me. i spilt my drink on the sofa. I think i should go to bed before i do any more damage and also it was ten o clock.

So i dashed up the stairs quick as lightning and thought i better call my mum to see when she is coming home, so i went to the phone in my bedroom only to realise it had been cut. "strange" i said as i grabbed my pjs and went into the bathroom to get changed and brush my teeth. then i turned on the tap and washed my face.

Then i walked into the bedroom and locked the door behind me just in case of the monsters. so i checked in the wardrobe and under the bed then i turned out the light and climbed into the bed. "OH i'm so glad we are safely locked in here together" shouted a strange voice. "AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW" went Summer.

The next morning the parents arrived to find their daughter there in pieces. Soon later the police arraived to examine the body but there was no evidence to what happened.

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