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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 11/21/2012
He knew that day that he loved her.The moment that he first saw her he was in love.
"Are you ready man?" the boys friend asked as he built up the nerve.
"Nope not at all." the boy said glaring over at the girl. She was beautiful with her curly blonde hair and neon emerald green eyes. The boy turned and walked to the girl.
"Hey can i talk to you?." the boy asked the girl as she leaned against her locker. the girl nodded. "I really like you and i was wondering if you wanted to go out with me."he continues as she looks up at him.
"Yes! Of course i would go out with you." the girl said with cheesy grin on her face.
*A week later*
"Hey babe." he said walking up to his girlfriend. There was something wrong. The girls eyes were red and puffy. Her curly hair was all tangled up. "Is everything okay?"he asked.
She hugged him and gripped onto the back of his shirt as tight as she could. "Didn't you hear? Your father died this morning." the girl said stil holding tight to him.
The boys mouth becomes dry"Hhh-ow did he die?" the boy asked trying to hold back his tears.
"He shot himself." The girlsaid. The boy put his head on the girls shoulder and started crying.
*A Year Later*
The boy was on his way to the girls house with a surprise to cheer her up. It was prom night and he was looking forward to going.
When he got to the girls house he knocked on the door.There was no answer.He knocked again and still got no answer. He walked into the house and went upstairs to the girls room. She laid there lifeless on her bed. He was in shock.
He shook the girl to see if she would awake. He checked her pulse. There was none. She couldn't be dead. She was carrying their 5 month old child. There was no heartbeat either.
The girls laptop was sitting next to her on the bed next to a big bottle of pills. The boy called 9-1-1 to report the overdose. The girl was put into the intensive care unit. The boy sat in the waiting room with the girls laptop on his lap. He read through her messages and found that his own best friend and other people were sending her threats. The threatened to kill the baby if she didn't die or get an abortion.
Hate raged through the boys body. His own friend was the cause of he suicide attempt of his fiance.The doctor came out and said that he has done everything that he could do and that the girl would be fine but the baby would have to stay in the hospital until it was healthy enough to go home.
*Five days later*
"Hi sweetheart how are you doing?" he asked the girl as she was drinking water from a clear plastic cup.
"Terrible.Im so sorry that I killed the baby. I had to so we could be together."the girl cried as she started to sob.
"its okay. Its okay. The baby is okay he is going to be able to go home in no time if he keeps doing good." the boy reassured the girl.
*Two Months Later*
the girl made a full recovery and was getting ready for the baby's homecoming. She decorated the nursery and everything that the baby would need.
"the hospital just called..." the boy said. His eyes were red from crying.
"What did they say?" the girl asked looking worried.
"He died today.His heart failed while being given his morning feeding." the boy said breaking down crying.
The girl was speechless. She had just lost her baby.
later on that day. The couple took a trip to the hospital to start making funeral plans for the baby. On the way a car was speeding it was in the wrong lane to turn into a certain direction. Well the turned the wrong way and had a head on collision. They both passed away in the accident.
THE END. I hope you enjoyed.
can it really get worse(sammzimmermN)
He knew that day that he loved her.The moment that he first saw her he was in love.
"Are you ready man?" the boys friend asked as he built up the nerve.
"Nope not at all." the boy said glaring over at the girl. She was beautiful with her curly blonde hair and neon emerald green eyes. The boy turned and walked to the girl.
"Hey can i talk to you?." the boy asked the girl as she leaned against her locker. the girl nodded. "I really like you and i was wondering if you wanted to go out with me."he continues as she looks up at him.
"Yes! Of course i would go out with you." the girl said with cheesy grin on her face.
*A week later*
"Hey babe." he said walking up to his girlfriend. There was something wrong. The girls eyes were red and puffy. Her curly hair was all tangled up. "Is everything okay?"he asked.
She hugged him and gripped onto the back of his shirt as tight as she could. "Didn't you hear? Your father died this morning." the girl said stil holding tight to him.
The boys mouth becomes dry"Hhh-ow did he die?" the boy asked trying to hold back his tears.
"He shot himself." The girlsaid. The boy put his head on the girls shoulder and started crying.
*A Year Later*
The boy was on his way to the girls house with a surprise to cheer her up. It was prom night and he was looking forward to going.
When he got to the girls house he knocked on the door.There was no answer.He knocked again and still got no answer. He walked into the house and went upstairs to the girls room. She laid there lifeless on her bed. He was in shock.
He shook the girl to see if she would awake. He checked her pulse. There was none. She couldn't be dead. She was carrying their 5 month old child. There was no heartbeat either.
The girls laptop was sitting next to her on the bed next to a big bottle of pills. The boy called 9-1-1 to report the overdose. The girl was put into the intensive care unit. The boy sat in the waiting room with the girls laptop on his lap. He read through her messages and found that his own best friend and other people were sending her threats. The threatened to kill the baby if she didn't die or get an abortion.
Hate raged through the boys body. His own friend was the cause of he suicide attempt of his fiance.The doctor came out and said that he has done everything that he could do and that the girl would be fine but the baby would have to stay in the hospital until it was healthy enough to go home.
*Five days later*
"Hi sweetheart how are you doing?" he asked the girl as she was drinking water from a clear plastic cup.
"Terrible.Im so sorry that I killed the baby. I had to so we could be together."the girl cried as she started to sob.
"its okay. Its okay. The baby is okay he is going to be able to go home in no time if he keeps doing good." the boy reassured the girl.
*Two Months Later*
the girl made a full recovery and was getting ready for the baby's homecoming. She decorated the nursery and everything that the baby would need.
"the hospital just called..." the boy said. His eyes were red from crying.
"What did they say?" the girl asked looking worried.
"He died today.His heart failed while being given his morning feeding." the boy said breaking down crying.
The girl was speechless. She had just lost her baby.
later on that day. The couple took a trip to the hospital to start making funeral plans for the baby. On the way a car was speeding it was in the wrong lane to turn into a certain direction. Well the turned the wrong way and had a head on collision. They both passed away in the accident.
THE END. I hope you enjoyed.
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