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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Love stories / Romance
- Subject: Death / Heartbreak / Loss
- Published: 08/14/2013
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Hanna and Patrick have been dating for 5 years, they're just the perfect couple and they work at the same pharmacy. On Hanna's 21st birthday, Patrick decides to take her out to a nice restaurant to have dinner and he had another great surprise which he didn't tell her. He sent her a text saying,
From Patrick:
Hi dear, get ready, I am taking you out for dinner. I'll pick you up at 9 pm.
Love you dear, happy birthday!
Hanna jumped for joy when she recieved that message! She sat the whole day deciding what to wear, a short dress or a long one...a red one or a pink one...her gold watch or her silver bracelet!
It was 8 pm and Hanna was dressed up like a princess, she wore her charming short white dress, her perfect red high heels, wore cute little makeup and tied her amazing straight hair into a ponytail!
Hanna's blue eyes sparkled with happiness as she waited for Patrick to pick her up..................................
Time passed...it was 11 pm and no one came. She went out of her house and HERE CAME THE SURPRISE! Patrick was lying dead in front of Hanna's door! Hanna screamed "Patrick!.....Answer me!" Hanna hugged patrick and told him good bye. she promised him she'll never forget him!
Two days passed. hanna felt miserable. she cried her eyes out ......a little while later the doctor's report was sent to Hanna, it said Patrick had a serious heart disease which he didn't even know about! Hanna kept Patrick's coat * the one he was wearing when he died * she got it out everyday...but one day the coat fell down and a small box came out of the pocket........Hanna opened it .......IT WAS A WEDDING RING ATTACHED WITH A MESSAGE SAYING, I LOVE YOU HANNA................................HE WAS GOING TO PROPOSE! THAT WAS THE SURPRISE!
From Patrick:
Hi dear, get ready, I am taking you out for dinner. I'll pick you up at 9 pm.
Love you dear, happy birthday!
Hanna jumped for joy when she recieved that message! She sat the whole day deciding what to wear, a short dress or a long one...a red one or a pink one...her gold watch or her silver bracelet!
It was 8 pm and Hanna was dressed up like a princess, she wore her charming short white dress, her perfect red high heels, wore cute little makeup and tied her amazing straight hair into a ponytail!
Hanna's blue eyes sparkled with happiness as she waited for Patrick to pick her up..................................
Time passed...it was 11 pm and no one came. She went out of her house and HERE CAME THE SURPRISE! Patrick was lying dead in front of Hanna's door! Hanna screamed "Patrick!.....Answer me!" Hanna hugged patrick and told him good bye. she promised him she'll never forget him!
Two days passed. hanna felt miserable. she cried her eyes out ......a little while later the doctor's report was sent to Hanna, it said Patrick had a serious heart disease which he didn't even know about! Hanna kept Patrick's coat * the one he was wearing when he died * she got it out everyday...but one day the coat fell down and a small box came out of the pocket........Hanna opened it .......IT WAS A WEDDING RING ATTACHED WITH A MESSAGE SAYING, I LOVE YOU HANNA................................HE WAS GOING TO PROPOSE! THAT WAS THE SURPRISE!
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