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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Crime
- Published: 01/21/2015
I’m just sitting at home, waiting for everyone to come home. I have two sons and one daughter. I see the time and it’s 3:00, my daughter and sons usually come home at this time. I hear the door open, my son says “I’m home”, I went to meet him, I asked him how his day was, he said “It was okay” and I smiled. The door opened again, and someone said “hi mom”, that was my other son. He met me and went straight to his room, he didn’t sit downstairs with us that much. So, both of my sons are home, but my daughter isn’t, where is she? The door opens again, “I’m home” it’s my husband, I said “Hi Mark, do you know where Lisa is?" he thought for a bit and said “Isn’t she in her room?” I said “No, Steve and Mark are both home, but Christina never came home”.
Mark was thinking for some time, then he asked “Did you see her this morning?” I said “Yes”. “What was she wearing?” asked Mark. I thought for some time, and said “um, black jeans, and, I think, a blue shirt” Mark nodded and got his phone out of his pocket. “What are you doing?” I asked. “Calling the school to find out where she is”. I sat down on the sofa and was just thinking about where Lisa might be. After some time I hear a knock on the door, I look up, and my sons both come into the room. “Who’s here?” asked my son David. “I don’t know” I said. My husband came and answered the door, a man came in, my husband looked at me and said “Christina, this is detective bubbles, he’s going to help us find Lisa” I say “Ok” and shake detective bubbles’ hand.
Detective bubbles and I go to the laptop, he’s researching something, I’m not sure what. I ask him what he’s researching, he looked at me and said “mm, I see there were a few murders recently”, and we all know, there’s at least one murder or death everyday. We’re just pondering when we hear a knock on the wall, we look up, it’s Christina. “Do you want some tea or coffee?” Mark looks up and says “No, Actually, detective bubbles was just about to leave” I asked “oh, what did you find out?” detective bubbles said “Nothing, really”. He left, and was walking towards his black sedan across the street. Mark was just walking to the sofa when we hear a knock on the door, confused, Mark turns around and opens the door, it was detective bubbles, I look up and he says “I just saw the name of this street” There was a long pause, then he says “I need the computer again”. He went on the computer and was reading the news, he read something, looked up and sait “Wait”.
He saw the name of this street, Magdalene street, he saw the address of this house, 19, he looked up and yelled “Mark” I walked towards him, then he said “I think Lisa, was murdered”, I raised my hand to slap him, but he got my hand. I thought about what he said, that might be true, because we never heard of her, and a lot of people were getting murdered here. But, who would kill sarah? She’s a very sweet girl. Then we went to the closest hospital to this house, and asked about all they knew of her. Doctor Williamson said “We haven’t buried the body yet” and he walked to his left, and looked at us. He called us over, we went there and saw a dead body. Doctor Williamson said “We found her body two days ago, on the floor in front of 19 magdalene street”. I got shocked, how come I didn’t see her? “At 2;PM she was shot”. I asked “By who?” he thought for a bit and said ‘By someone wearing white pants, and a pink shirt”, he showed me a picture taken on that day and I saw three women wearing that. The neighbor, the other neighbor, and my wife.
We were feeling hungry so we went home to eat dinner, Christina was making dinner while I went to the room, I saw a blue box which I never saw there before. I opened the box to see what was in it, I saw a gun. I started thinking, “did my wife kill her? Did I marry a murderer?”.
I went downstairs and said “Christina, I found something” and she started laughing and said “We all find” right then I slapped her, and asked “Did you kill our only daughter?” Christina said “so, we also have 2 sons”, I asked “Is that your next plan? To kill them too?” she said “well, they’re going to die someday” I yelled “so, don’t kill anyone before their time comes”, she said “ok, where are you going?” I just ignored her, when I went back there, she said “what happened?” I said “Nothing, See you in hell”.
where is he?(Hafsa Mufti)
I’m just sitting at home, waiting for everyone to come home. I have two sons and one daughter. I see the time and it’s 3:00, my daughter and sons usually come home at this time. I hear the door open, my son says “I’m home”, I went to meet him, I asked him how his day was, he said “It was okay” and I smiled. The door opened again, and someone said “hi mom”, that was my other son. He met me and went straight to his room, he didn’t sit downstairs with us that much. So, both of my sons are home, but my daughter isn’t, where is she? The door opens again, “I’m home” it’s my husband, I said “Hi Mark, do you know where Lisa is?" he thought for a bit and said “Isn’t she in her room?” I said “No, Steve and Mark are both home, but Christina never came home”.
Mark was thinking for some time, then he asked “Did you see her this morning?” I said “Yes”. “What was she wearing?” asked Mark. I thought for some time, and said “um, black jeans, and, I think, a blue shirt” Mark nodded and got his phone out of his pocket. “What are you doing?” I asked. “Calling the school to find out where she is”. I sat down on the sofa and was just thinking about where Lisa might be. After some time I hear a knock on the door, I look up, and my sons both come into the room. “Who’s here?” asked my son David. “I don’t know” I said. My husband came and answered the door, a man came in, my husband looked at me and said “Christina, this is detective bubbles, he’s going to help us find Lisa” I say “Ok” and shake detective bubbles’ hand.
Detective bubbles and I go to the laptop, he’s researching something, I’m not sure what. I ask him what he’s researching, he looked at me and said “mm, I see there were a few murders recently”, and we all know, there’s at least one murder or death everyday. We’re just pondering when we hear a knock on the wall, we look up, it’s Christina. “Do you want some tea or coffee?” Mark looks up and says “No, Actually, detective bubbles was just about to leave” I asked “oh, what did you find out?” detective bubbles said “Nothing, really”. He left, and was walking towards his black sedan across the street. Mark was just walking to the sofa when we hear a knock on the door, confused, Mark turns around and opens the door, it was detective bubbles, I look up and he says “I just saw the name of this street” There was a long pause, then he says “I need the computer again”. He went on the computer and was reading the news, he read something, looked up and sait “Wait”.
He saw the name of this street, Magdalene street, he saw the address of this house, 19, he looked up and yelled “Mark” I walked towards him, then he said “I think Lisa, was murdered”, I raised my hand to slap him, but he got my hand. I thought about what he said, that might be true, because we never heard of her, and a lot of people were getting murdered here. But, who would kill sarah? She’s a very sweet girl. Then we went to the closest hospital to this house, and asked about all they knew of her. Doctor Williamson said “We haven’t buried the body yet” and he walked to his left, and looked at us. He called us over, we went there and saw a dead body. Doctor Williamson said “We found her body two days ago, on the floor in front of 19 magdalene street”. I got shocked, how come I didn’t see her? “At 2;PM she was shot”. I asked “By who?” he thought for a bit and said ‘By someone wearing white pants, and a pink shirt”, he showed me a picture taken on that day and I saw three women wearing that. The neighbor, the other neighbor, and my wife.
We were feeling hungry so we went home to eat dinner, Christina was making dinner while I went to the room, I saw a blue box which I never saw there before. I opened the box to see what was in it, I saw a gun. I started thinking, “did my wife kill her? Did I marry a murderer?”.
I went downstairs and said “Christina, I found something” and she started laughing and said “We all find” right then I slapped her, and asked “Did you kill our only daughter?” Christina said “so, we also have 2 sons”, I asked “Is that your next plan? To kill them too?” she said “well, they’re going to die someday” I yelled “so, don’t kill anyone before their time comes”, she said “ok, where are you going?” I just ignored her, when I went back there, she said “what happened?” I said “Nothing, See you in hell”.
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